VN Ren'Py Shaddolands -WHID [v1.0] [Shaddo]

LordyMcLord

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Har to tell about the eyes cause in the new one she is looking up and away. the lips in the old seem more normal to me. the New ones are more botox looking... like pouty lips. I notice the jaw line changed a lot and also you thickened the neck... All in all not bad... good in fact. But, You asked which one we like... And I kinda like the first... don't shoot the messenger !
No intention of shooting the messenger, I asked for criticism and you gave it. Nice one mate thanks. Actually all your points were valid. I just thought she needed to look a bit younger and a bit softer. Take your point with the lips, I might mess around a bit and and change those (y)
 

LordyMcLord

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Just an aside here... I don't take anyone for idiots until proven otherwise. 90 plus percent of the members here are top notch people, many of whom create their own games. Those that give positive and earnest criticism are in the majority and I applaud them, without them many of us devs would not progress further than the first hurdle. My overall plan for Shaddolands will take in the region of two years to complete. I don't have a day job, I'm a retired firefighter living off my pension and I do this because I love working with DAZ and Ren'Py to create entertainment. Of course I want to make enough money to cover the costs of assets etc. but it is not my main focus. I hope that clarifies my intentions.
 
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Candy1970

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my only complaint is ya get us all hot and bothered to see the gang bang at the stag party AND THEN PULL THE RUG OUT FROM UNDER US LOL ....SERIOUSLY GOOD WORK
 
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benne123

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the game is not good. no content. The graphics are not good. For my part I move on to something else .
 
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Adhdclassic

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Hi folks,

I noticed a few comments that accused Amanda of being... shall we say weird!

So I did a bit of tweaking and came up with this revised version of Amanda. She was a bit upset at having to go through the surgery, but she seems happier with the result now.

Take a look at the before and after and see what you think.

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revised looks smoother
 
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bassem88f

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Since it's female protagonist, going by description it seems like you'll be the one doing the cheating, instead of being cheated on.

If it is actual NTR and it's the guy getting seduced and cheating on the MC then it'd be quite rare as far as these games go.
yes the opposite i Netori,but sometimes u can have both if both cheating..which good lol
 

lurkin

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Why does the balcony move in front of the window during the party talk and why do they use FUCKING EMOJIS as they speak?
 
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LordyMcLord

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Why does the balcony move in front of the window during the party talk and why do they use FUCKING EMOJIS as they speak?
The balcony itself doesn't move, what you see in the background is a seperate object. Trouble is it's too small, so I have to move it to avoid transparent areas. I'm still very much a beginner at DAZ3D so yeah, I guess I need to find another option. Maybe a separate building outside. I'll fix it in the next update.

As for the emojis, I just thought it would be a good idea... I'd be interested to know what others thought of it.
 
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LordyMcLord

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correct me if i m wrong,at the begining NTR is unavoidable and second part avoidable? so i will be always NTR.
I actually didn't tag as NTR, the reference only appears in the spoiler. Part 1 has no NTR, but Part 2 will have avoidable NTR
 

PsychoCistern

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I am really liking the game so far. The story seems to flow really nice, and I enjoy that the guy is still slamming some ham. It's stupid when the guy is a total bitch and never ends up laying some pipe and the games just have the woman fuck everyone else but him. Excited to see where the game goes. Great job so far
 
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