VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

[PanchoPistolas33]

Que pasa el la última ecena del juego ?

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[L0b0ts]

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Scotty, never a good idea to invoke the Spitz

Finally had time to play through the update and I don't know what to think. About every prediction I've made was totally wrong. More am I surprised at how fast and far Mr. Palmer moved the story and plots along as well as what he added to the mix.

The Add

So lactation was added to the story (sort of) to round out Anna's situation. Minor note but it does flesh out Anna being a new mom and it could be expanded on in the kink area or just a tool as it was in this release. A huge plot development was how Anna went off on Marvin. How will MP resurrect the Anna/Marvin path after Anna has gone nuclear on him-- near on path ending. Sure down the road an Anna in a better mood could use some little facts that she knows Marvin has a key to the breast pumping room, and or Anna can torture Marvin in making him beg for forgiveness, but that leaves a lot of plausibility problems.

Yawn Fest

So I played the Jake path just to see it and wasn't disappointed in a good way. The twist was a bit of what now is going to be part of the troupes cock worship. Not only with Jake, but somewhat with Robinson nearly having his junk in Anna's face during the massage, and of course with Chris (surprise, surprise, NOT!), though the BJ occurred soon than I expected it. Sigh... again most women are not into how the dick looks or see it as the Holy Rod of God but take interest in it for what it can do. Now on it's going to be commentary from Anna how so-and-so stacks up against David in size. The best part out of all this is Anna recognizing Chris has more staying power than David-- now when the story gets to the pipe laying events and techniques are compared then the story starts to fall back into reality.

Ka-Blam!

What the Hell! Timothy and Dale scene was the best part of the whole release. Not that two randos whom we are likely never to see again got in a good ass grope of Anna, and Anna was in total character being too aroused and letting it go too far. A bit of a taste with it with Robinson. Anna being dominated and objectifying makes sense of her character fits all the other content previously and makes total sense of the Chris/Anna shower scene.

Cock Blocking

David threatening to come over to Robinson's house knowing she is there... now that was surprising. Sad it ended the scene but in a long list of stupid tags you can put on David that one was the second most devastating to his marriage. So now we have a panty-sniffer- nude-pic collector. The deal Chris struck with Leanard pretty much rules out Leanard from the running, so it's going to be dueling cocks between Robinson and Chris while those to great friends (sic) shaft David over his wife.

David, all hail the idiot king

This post could be just on the Idiot King alone! If there was a book "Pissing off your wife for dummies," David wrote it. Bad enough Anna is leaning on cold calculations and contingencies for the worst, but Sophie-blackmail...WTF. Sure it's not all blackmail directly but putting the idea of shared custody and legal rights when your situation with the wife is perilous to begin with... Compound that with "my wife this," "my wife that" demands as if Anna is an object or possession, David is lucky to not be not sleeping in the backyard in a tent. But... then what one would expect of David. "Careful of the company you keep," never a cautionary tale David lived by. Everyone of his friends is a POS. That is more a David thing. A pile of dog turds in a yard can't help but be s***. But going forward for any of those playing to save the marriage, how does MP recover the marriage while David is pouring gas on his bridges to Anna, and Anna is reaching for the match herself!

Yeah I agree about Marvin, he really fucked it up and the new Timothy and Dale storyline is taking the game next level and they know to shut up about it or ruin it with Anna. I would more say Anna is a size Queen, than cock worship, she isn't obsessed with cock but she likes bigger size and as her journey progresses she will experience bigger and bigger cock and Chris will be left in the wake.

 

[Krat0$]

Who asked your opinion I decide what game is and isn't for me, not you

You ?
don't whine in public forum if you don't wanna hear response from it.

 

[Sadowdark]

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Scotty, never a good idea to invoke the Spitz

Finally had time to play through the update and I don't know what to think. About every prediction I've made was totally wrong. More am I surprised at how fast and far Mr. Palmer moved the story and plots along as well as what he added to the mix.

The Add

So lactation was added to the story (sort of) to round out Anna's situation. Minor note but it does flesh out Anna being a new mom and it could be expanded on in the kink area or just a tool as it was in this release. A huge plot development was how Anna went off on Marvin. How will MP resurrect the Anna/Marvin path after Anna has gone nuclear on him-- near on path ending. Sure down the road an Anna in a better mood could use some little facts that she knows Marvin has a key to the breast pumping room, and or Anna can torture Marvin in making him beg for forgiveness, but that leaves a lot of plausibility problems.

Yawn Fest

So I played the Jake path just to see it and wasn't disappointed in a good way. The twist was a bit of what now is going to be part of the troupes cock worship. Not only with Jake, but somewhat with Robinson nearly having his junk in Anna's face during the massage, and of course with Chris (surprise, surprise, NOT!), though the BJ occurred soon than I expected it. Sigh... again most women are not into how the dick looks or see it as the Holy Rod of God but take interest in it for what it can do. Now on it's going to be commentary from Anna how so-and-so stacks up against David in size. The best part out of all this is Anna recognizing Chris has more staying power than David-- now when the story gets to the pipe laying events and techniques are compared then the story starts to fall back into reality.

Ka-Blam!

What the Hell! Timothy and Dale scene was the best part of the whole release. Not that two randos whom we are likely never to see again got in a good ass grope of Anna, and Anna was in total character being too aroused and letting it go too far. A bit of a taste with it with Robinson. Anna being dominated and objectifying makes sense of her character fits all the other content previously and makes total sense of the Chris/Anna shower scene.

Cock Blocking

David threatening to come over to Robinson's house knowing she is there... now that was surprising. Sad it ended the scene but in a long list of stupid tags you can put on David that one was the second most devastating to his marriage. So now we have a panty-sniffer- nude-pic collector. The deal Chris struck with Leanard pretty much rules out Leanard from the running, so it's going to be dueling cocks between Robinson and Chris while those to great friends (sic) shaft David over his wife.

David, all hail the idiot king

This post could be just on the Idiot King alone! If there was a book "Pissing off your wife for dummies," David wrote it. Bad enough Anna is leaning on cold calculations and contingencies for the worst, but Sophie-blackmail...WTF. Sure it's not all blackmail directly but putting the idea of shared custody and legal rights when your situation with the wife is perilous to begin with... Compound that with "my wife this," "my wife that" demands as if Anna is an object or possession, David is lucky to not be not sleeping in the backyard in a tent. But... then what one would expect of David. "Careful of the company you keep," never a cautionary tale David lived by. Everyone of his friends is a POS. That is more a David thing. A pile of dog turds in a yard can't help but be s***. But going forward for any of those playing to save the marriage, how does MP recover the marriage while David is pouring gas on his bridges to Anna, and Anna is reaching for the match herself!

You forgot about the scenes in Penguin's office, buddy.

 

[Sadowdark]

What path do you have to be on in order to unlock the scene where she masterbates in the shower?

corruption

 

[L0b0ts]

Anna will probably increase the teasing of Marvin till she breaks his mind and he goes completely crazy.

 

[Sadowdark]

Fuck, why is Anna such a stupid idiot? She doesn't want to show the pictures that her fake friend sent her, when he took them of drunk David, when he was dancing with Alexa. I don't know if Alexa left pictures too or was it Braxton? Of David, when he left with Alexa outside the club, David would quickly remember how it all looked.

 

[Sadowdark]

Anna will probably increase the teasing of Marvin till she breaks his mind and he goes completely crazy.

As the creator said you will get the final choice to reject any of the sexual predators. It looks like we are slowly getting there.Anna doesn't tease the old fish Anna tease us because this is not what we expected in the survey if you want to see tits then you will see it .

 

[Adhdclassic]

David is not super smart but he is refreshing. Most AVNs the MC usually is a pushover David started as the loving and trusting husband even though his wife was not so(my opinion on the wife). As this gets further his fathers words are starting to make him more aware. This update David is getting ballsy. He is questioning things not just accepting it. When he threaten to go to Robinsons if she didnt show up in 5 minutes, I was like there you go. Then he monologued about watching Robinson. Then the thoughts of her cheating. Even if he has doubts they are now in his head. Most MCs would have just left it as is but he is showing backbone. The fact that he looked up the his rights regarding his kid says he isn't going to be push around.

 

[TeamEquipe]

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Anna, Kendra and Jake appear in both stories, with Anna's seduction and corruption the main plot.

Good guess but wrong. They were both written separately; but from the same premise.
The outline of a plot including characters was sent to me, and as I later found out, another author on Literotica.
We both wrote our versions without prior knowledge of each other until Temptation was published.
This prompted me to finish my version, which I had started but not completed.
I didn't read Temptation until I had submitted my story.

 

[DarthSpitz717]

Yeah I agree about Marvin, he really fucked it up and the new Timothy and Dale storyline is taking the game next level and they know to shut up about it or ruin it with Anna. I would more say Anna is a size Queen, than cock worship, she isn't obsessed with cock but she likes bigger size and as her journey progresses she will experience bigger and bigger cock and Chris will be left in the wake.

Something I didn't want to go on another of my wild goose chase on was baby making or if anyone prefers, breeding. It's been mentioned again by Anna about her situation with David making another baby. But then even Anna's doctor was hinting at Anna getting some (from somewhere). Maybe it's a something in the storyline... just like lactation as being introduced as either just a simple fact or plays a part in the story. But it's safe to say the following:

It's been 8 months since little Sophie came into the picture, so Anna's body is ready for number two.
It is doubtful Anna is on birth control. A possible part of the story's plot?
And Anna wants, desires to have another child. I've known women who love being knocked up...so, maybe?

L0b0ts, going to your observation, its maybe not the cock in particular that is alluring to Anna but its function and use. Looking at it from a woman's point of view, dick and how it makes them feel during the act and even after a good seeding....awh hormones gotta love 'em. There is a song by Gillette, "Short dick man" that is kind of at play here. Am sure Anna isn't into men with a Trouser Mouse, but also isn't into Trouser Howitzers either. I suspect the game is going to lean on technique and being long and thick enough to get the job done that ain't David

You forgot about the scenes in Penguin's office, buddy.

Sadowdark, our friend Hank does fall in the Yawn fest part of my post. I had hoped Hank would have some game in seduction preying on Anna's carnal side... and Anna's body being turned on (the idea of being used like with the office boys Timothy and Dale) but Anna's mind still being grossed out over Hank. But it's blackmail and Anna's own calculating mind allowing that path to go forward. I'd rather see Anna being somewhat guilty for whatever comes up as to being just a simple victim of blackmail. Now... to be fair there is a play Hank going down the "Daddy's issues" path that might turn around that thread.

But when you all add up my score card, there isn't a lot of points. At best all I can is speculate general themes rather than content. This update totally threw out all my tea leaf readings about Mr. Palmer's over all plans... again the Coffee Break Room withj Timothy and Dale shatters my theories.

 

[catgameryt011]

No payment required. This is free But I must also say that my interest in this story is decreasing day by day... Too many unnecessary characters added. Chris, Jack, Hank, and Marvin's paths would suffice. It's okay for the actions in the story to be delayed... But if she's going to have something with someone, I'd rather the plot be well-designed. Like the war going on inside her and why she lost it. I didn't like that she turned into public property in one day.

but is there or is there not an update from you on marvin and anna?

 

[Menace o Santana]

When he threaten to go to Robinsons if she didnt show up in 5 minutes, I was like there you go.

That is he most Daring thing David ever did so far in the whole game at least we can expect to see a more daring and confident David in a near future updates.
It will not only benefit the players but the game also, i mean David confident would be a huge Originality bringing to this plot. Usually in most of slow developpement cheating plot the MC is always a little submisive if not a little,(a completely coward) who's to affraid to question his wife.I hope that Mr Palmer will not throw the idea of David being Confident, that will benefit the plot a lot in the Faithfull route and also in the cheating route.

 

[Adhdclassic]

That is he most Daring thing David ever did so far in the whole game at least we can expect to see a more daring and confident David in a near future updates.
It will not only benefit the players but the game also, i mean David confident would be a huge Originality bringing to this plot. Usually in most of slow developpement cheating plot the MC is always a little submisive if not a little,(a completely coward) who's to affraid to question his wife.I hope that Mr Palmer will not throw the idea of David being Confident, that will benefit the plot a lot in the Faithfull route and also in the cheating route.

The scene would have been even better when she said she's at Robinsons and they were talking he said OK hung up. Next thing you knew he was knocking on the door.

 

[DarthSpitz717]

That is he most Daring thing David ever did so far in the whole game at least we can expect to see a more daring and confident David in a near future updates.
It will not only benefit the players but the game also, i mean David confident would be a huge Originality bringing to this plot. Usually in most of slow developpement cheating plot the MC is always a little submisive if not a little,(a completely coward) who's to affraid to question his wife.I hope that Mr Palmer will not throw the idea of David being Confident, that will benefit the plot a lot in the Faithfull route and also in the cheating route.

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Oh David definitely overestimates himself, but we are watching a drowning man tying rocks around his neck. Now if he is thinking he is a butt-kicking-name-taking machine, I suppose when a desperate guy is in the throws of panic and emotional upheaval, even a mouse can become a tiger.

Ever hear someone say, "that's not fair"? Fun fact life isn't fair but our hero, David, believes he has certain rights because Anna is his wife... this update made David treat Anna more like property than a person. Further, by asserting his rights of half custody of Sophie and almost to the point of making ultimatums is emotionally enraged David acting out. I wonder how many players of this game out there feels sorry for David?

Would David have come to blows with Robinson had he gone over? I'd say that's a 50/50 possibility. Certainly with 100% likelihood he would have made it clear Anna is his wife and belongs to him. Damn few boys like to share their toys, another fun fact of life.

As to this game regardless of a player's choices, David is a mild semi-insecure man when it comes to his wife. Jealous when there is no call for it, clueless when tact is required, and totally blind (just look at his "friends"). The brief encounters we see of David's father just shows how lacking David is. The father was right in one way, marrying a pretty woman has its own perils and perhaps the old man knew his son didn't have the balls and self-confidence to have married such a goddess.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Good guess but wrong. They were both written separately; but from the same premise.
The outline of a plot including characters was sent to me, and as I later found out, another author on Literotica.
We both wrote our versions without prior knowledge of each other until Temptation was published.
This prompted me to finish my version, which I had started but not completed.
I didn't read Temptation until I had submitted my story.

gotta say both stories were good but temptation was better story was more extensive, and the revenge was nice too.

 

[Guszti242]

)I play on a safe path and I am not aggressive with Anna. The treacherous road also has an extra level, but there are some where you are aggressive towards it, but it is still treacherous. And I don't mind drinking.

 

[Menace o Santana]

The scene would have been even better when she said she's at Robinsons and they were talking he said OK hung up. Next thing you knew he was knocking on the door.

Is still too earlier for a Daring action like that.It would be too direct and that would probably make thing worse between him and Anna. A scene like that could fit more when Anna have one evidenc that David was set up and despite this evidence she's still investigating.

 

[Menace o Santana]

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Oh David definitely overestimates himself, but we are watching a drowning man tying rocks around his neck. Now if he is thinking he is a butt-kicking-name-taking machine, I suppose when a desperate guy is in the throws of panic and emotional upheaval, even a mouse can become a tiger.

Ever hear someone say, "that's not fair"? Fun fact life isn't fair but our hero, David, believes he has certain rights because Anna is his wife... this update made David treat Anna more like property than a person. Further, by asserting his rights of half custody of Sophie and almost to the point of making ultimatums is emotionally enraged David acting out. I wonder how many players of this game out there feels sorry for David?

Would David have come to blows with Robinson had he gone over? I'd say that's a 50/50 possibility. Certainly with 100% likelihood he would have made it clear Anna is his wife and belongs to him. Damn few boys like to share their toys, another fun fact of life.

Look this may be only my opinion but still i don't think David treated Anna like his property in this update but more like he's claiming his rights.
Again that's bring back the argument of the girl and boy friendship do you think it's normal for your wife spending time with your male neighbor? as innocent and harmless this question could be, first look at the context. The dude is being set up he know he doesn't cheat, he know Anna has huge doubts,he know his marriage had somehow damaged and he know there are other men who want her such as Jack i will not say Chris kuz apparently his too naive to think that they are Friends.
So if David decided to wear the pants now i don't think He's treating her like his prooerty but more like claiming his rigt as a Husband is it too late? Probabely not depends on what path you're playing

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The father was right in one way, marrying a pretty woman has its own perils and perhaps the old man knew his son didn't have the balls and self-confidence to have married such a goddess.

I will not say that his father was right.The problem is not about her beauty.if you're looking for logics it depends on the woman and also in the man behave.In this situation i will say they both at fault Anna is not really doing too much to stop the molester and David was a pussy at the begenning to behave like a real man just look at the meeting with Hank and pregnant Anna.The old fart grabbed Anna's pumpum in front of David, he saw that but instead of shop the guy head he preferred to go and confronted Anna who denied everything, i mean WTF? You saw something with your own eyes how the hell would you go and confronted your wife? maybe she would enjoyed it (slutty reaction in front of hubby) but a normal dude with two Gold balls would confront Hank maybe without violence but trust me the old fart would have some serious explanation to do.This is just a game so i will not complain about those things earlier.
Seeing how David reaction in this update was, it was time for him to grow some pair!

 

[D4ker]

I wish I could see Kendra having sex with David))))))))