So the first misstep, when Jill starts to remove her clothing, the fucking idiot mc is like:
mc: "(What's going on?)"
What's going on with your brain, dickwad? His response should have been (like it was in the mind of every cunt playing this game right then and there):
mc: "(Oh fuck yes!!)"
The mc then, white knight moron that he is, checks to see if Jill is ok going forward. You trying to cockblock yourself or what, Fuckface?! If she had responded, "On second thoughts, maybe this is rushing into things, sorry to interrupt your evening, I'll be going now", there wouldn't be anyone left on this forum to defend Jill, because they all would have killed themselves!
Then the mc is all like:
mc: "Wanna go to bed?

"
As cliched a move that it is, it's still a good move.
But her response was funny:
Jill: "Ok."