VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

[DarthSpitz717]

so far I don't understand why they inserted Dal and Tim, because there will be more competition, and that will hinder the story as far as I see it

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Timothy/Dale for now at least are plot tools.

During their intro they helped explain how vulnerable Anna is during erotic situations, so it helped define her character more. And it's a useful explanation when Anna will be confronted by Marvin and Grant. Hank doesn't need Anna's vulnerability as much to explain his interaction with Anna (upcoming) but am sure it will play some part. It's Marvin and Grant, who needs to have that vulnerability to get around the fact they are pathetic specimens of males.

The more realistic options of Chris, Jake, and Robinson for Anna have youth, personality, and character to bridge relationships

Does the story further need Timothy/Dale? No not really. Now they could help drive the cheating plot of the story if they are kept. Their best use would be some sort of catalysis that sets things in motion...think when the time comes with Anna staring over a cliff, Timothy/Dale are the shove that sends Anna off the cliff. Now if just used for some sex scene for GPs, Timothy/Dale lose their effectiveness as plot devices. Sure the sex scene might be entertaining to some extent, but if combined with plot/story development... wow!

Ironically a whole Timothy/Dale interaction with Anna's character development, would help with Marcel angle to the story if that is Mr. Palmer's intent.

 

[BulgariAMARA]

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Timothy/Dale for now at least are plot tools.

During their intro they helped explain how vulnerable Anna is during erotic situations, so it helped define her character more. And it's a useful explanation when Anna will be confronted by Marvin and Grant. Hank doesn't need Anna's vulnerability as much to explain his interaction with Anna (upcoming) but am sure it will play some part. It's Marvin and Grant, who needs to have that vulnerability to get around the fact they are pathetic specimens of males.

The more realistic options of Chris, Jake, and Robinson for Anna have youth, personality, and character to bridge relationships

Does the story further need Timothy/Dale? No not really. Now they could help drive the cheating plot of the story if they are kept. Their best use would be some sort of catalysis that sets things in motion...think when the time comes with Anna staring over a cliff, Timothy/Dale are the shove that sends Anna off the cliff. Now if just used for some sex scene for GPs, Timothy/Dale lose their effectiveness as plot devices. Sure the sex scene might be entertaining to some extent, but if combined with plot/story development... wow!

Ironically a whole Timothy/Dale interaction with Anna's character development, would help with Marcel angle to the story if that is Mr. Palmer's intent.

I don't know why you guys are arguing about these two, I liked their appearance in the story. Anna became even more naughty, she was a little excited by the situation. Now I'm interested in their next meeting, it has great potential to be very erotic and even sexy, depending on how liberated Anna is.
Their hands were on her ass over her skirt, maybe next time they would be under her skirt or even on her chest. Given the premise, I think it's quite likely.
In my opinion, the appearance of these guys harmoniously expands the plot, makes it even more interesting.

 

[sslovoe]

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Guys, can someone post all the spoilers for this update in normal quality and size?

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[BulgariAMARA]

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Wow. Thanks, I haven't seen some of them.
If 5 and 6 occur at the same time, then Anna will be pretty drunk.

 

[B@lubike]

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OMG they drink short after wine? There will be big trouble

 

[Arunrobin]

Actually person who give drink is actually jake who mix in Anna drink sleeping pills to ensure she is nearly become unconscious both have plan to take her in empty room so jake make fun with anna

 

[sslovoe]

Actually person who give drink is actually jake who mix in Anna drink sleeping pills to ensure she is nearly become unconscious both have plan to take her in empty room so jake make fun with anna

kendra control jake
and kendra want give marvin happy hour so he put camera in office
so her plan is when and how
see chat kendra with jake tell him not make any move out her plan
she promise marvin make thing to do


but for your point she tell marvin we not know someone will put in her glass when she not notice

so we have two path to see

 

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be careful with that, it is white, it is a sign that marvin will appear in the scene.

 

[sslovoe]

Imagine if kendra will be first for Ana..all those including me who joined this VN hoping that there's no lesbian in here atleast. So no matter how much he troll, it won't be longer than LP...but if he include kendra/Ana scene lol...I will unfollow MP

anna slow down kendra not so hard its soo hurt
kendra we just start slut ,,we not use biger one yet

 

[DarthSpitz717]

I don't know why you guys are arguing about these two, I liked their appearance in the story. Anna became even more naughty, she was a little excited by the situation. Now I'm interested in their next meeting, it has great potential to be very erotic and even sexy, depending on how liberated Anna is.
Their hands were on her ass over her skirt, maybe next time they would be under her skirt or even on her chest. Given the premise, I think it's quite likely.
In my opinion, the appearance of these guys harmoniously expands the plot, makes it even more interesting.

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There is no argument at all... just ideas how best Timothy/Dale could be used in the future

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I don't know why you guys are arguing about these two, I liked their appearance in the story. Anna became even more naughty, she was a little excited by the situation. Now I'm interested in their next meeting, it has great potential to be very erotic and even sexy, depending on how liberated Anna is. assuming there is a bigger role either of them have at this point
Their hands were on her ass over her skirt, maybe next time they would be under her skirt or even on her chest. Given the premise, I think it's quite likely. See I think the point of the coffee break room with Anna and Timothy and Dale had to make a point about Anna. Now where I am from, a gal gets ass groped out comes the bear spray if they are lucky... Anna could have gone all DEFCON 1 on Timothy/Dale, but instead she got sexually flustered... and that is the point I think Mr. Palmer was making about Anna's character that goes beyond those two
In my opinion, the appearance of these guys harmoniously expands the plot, makes it even more interesting. It's rare that a plot devise has a bite from the front and a sting from the back... but those two, Timothy/Dale supercharged the game and put more things into play

It just comes down to how Mr. Palmer goes forward with or without Timothy/Dale

 

[Couto25]

I don't know why you guys are arguing about these two, I liked their appearance in the story. Anna became even more naughty, she was a little excited by the situation. Now I'm interested in their next meeting, it has great potential to be very erotic and even sexy, depending on how liberated Anna is.
Their hands were on her ass over her skirt, maybe next time they would be under her skirt or even on her chest. Given the premise, I think it's quite likely.
In my opinion, the appearance of these guys harmoniously expands the plot, makes it even more interesting.

We are not against tim and Dale..we are more like why other antagonist couldn't progress upto the point of time and Dale yet. Whatever Tim and Dale did in their first meeting with Ana, Jake couldn't do it even after his 100th appearance. I am more towards make some progress with those old characters...that would be more interesting because they're already involved in the story

I am playing all love path for all antagonists. No hate against any antagonist. Ana will remain faithful towards all antagonists lol.

 

[Adhdclassic]

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There is no argument at all... just ideas how best Timothy/Dale could be used in the future

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I don't know why you guys are arguing about these two, I liked their appearance in the story. Anna became even more naughty, she was a little excited by the situation. Now I'm interested in their next meeting, it has great potential to be very erotic and even sexy, depending on how liberated Anna is. assuming there is a bigger role either of them have at this point
Their hands were on her ass over her skirt, maybe next time they would be under her skirt or even on her chest. Given the premise, I think it's quite likely. See I think the point of the coffee break room with Anna and Timothy and Dale had to make a point about Anna. Now where I am from, a gal gets ass groped out comes the bear spray if they are lucky... Anna could have gone all DEFCON 1 on Timothy/Dale, but instead she got sexually flustered... and that is the point I think Mr. Palmer was making about Anna's character that goes beyond those two
In my opinion, the appearance of these guys harmoniously expands the plot, makes it even more interesting. It's rare that a plot devise has a bite from the front and a sting from the back... but those two, Timothy/Dale supercharged the game and put more things into play

It just comes down to how Mr. Palmer goes forward with or without Timothy/Dale

Timothy and Dale have gone further than Jake. Think that is my only gripe. They came out of nowhere got touchy feely before a major antagonist. Every antagonist got a feel except him why not use a major under used antagonist. I never met you before but sure I will allow you to caress my ass and not throat punch you.

 

[BulgariAMARA]

We are not against tim and Dale..we are more like why other antagonist couldn't progress upto the point of time and Dale yet. Whatever Tim and Dale did in their first meeting with Ana, Jake couldn't do it even after his 100th appearance. I am more towards make some progress with those old characters...that would be more interesting because they're already involved in the story

I am playing all love path for all antagonists. No hate against any antagonist. Ana will remain faithful towards all antagonists lol.

Timothy and Dale have gone further than Jake. Think that is my only gripe. They came out of nowhere got touchy feely before a major antagonist. Every antagonist got a feel except him why not use a major under used antagonist. I never met you before but sure I will allow you to caress my ass and not throat punch you.

Your point of view is understandable, but the point is that in this way, through these two, the author showed us the result of what was happening to Anna. He showed us the level of her corruption, using a kind of provocation. We are used to certain heroes and the gentle development of events with them, to slow corruption. Now there has been a shot, after which the real race will begin and we will witness who will be the first and the last. Chris got Anna's mouth, now someone else will be there, and then maybe several at the same time. Hopefully, someone other than Chris will be the first on the next base.

 

[Davidleene]

Mr_Palmer we need a teaser for valentines day

 

[sslovoe]

MP dont even reply to those everyday who pay him every month. you think he's gonna reply to freebies who tag him everyday?

not problem he not replay and answer fan we know he not replay or answer for 2 year
the problem supporter only get one peek for month so they join no teas pic or post news only ...only one post and bad teas choice
that make supporter think why we here

 

[Sadowdark]

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Guys, can someone post all the spoilers for this update in normal quality and size?

You're very welcome, my friend

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[Sadowdark]

Timothy and Dale have gone further than Jake. Think that is my only gripe. They came out of nowhere got touchy feely before a major antagonist. Every antagonist got a feel except him why not use a major under used antagonist. I never met you before but sure I will allow you to caress my ass and not throat punch you.

These two random people were unnecessary. We already have too many unnecessary characters. They are stand-ins for Anna's corruption before the sex scenes, which we don't know when they're going to happen. Like in the AWM game Sophia fucks in all the past scenes or when she's dreaming. They are stand-ins for the supporters so they don't stop supporting him. So he's telling them "Be patient, there'll be sex Sophia, I've given you a taste of what the sex will be like. Wait light years for the sex to happen for sure.

 

[Couto25]

Timothy and Dale have gone further than Jake. Think that is my only gripe. They came out of nowhere got touchy feely before a major antagonist. Every antagonist got a feel except him why not use a major under used antagonist. I never met you before but sure I will allow you to caress my ass and not throat punch you.

Na Leonard and Marcel still left beside Jake too..they didn't felt Ana yet.

 

[Couto25]

Your point of view is understandable, but the point is that in this way, through these two, the author showed us the result of what was happening to Anna. He showed us the level of her corruption, using a kind of provocation. We are used to certain heroes and the gentle development of events with them, to slow corruption. Now there has been a shot, after which the real race will begin and we will witness who will be the first and the last. Chris got Anna's mouth, now someone else will be there, and then maybe several at the same time. Hopefully, someone other than Chris will be the first on the next base.

And second point is characters relevant to the story...like I can understand MP wants to show that office guys are attracted to Ana new looks...he could have done that with Jake and Marvin with some jealousy where both of them try to grope Ana in the office..

Now if those characters (tim and Dale)are irrelevant to the main storyline, as we see nowadays that even short updates are taking 3.5months of development time. These extra characters storyline will always take half month-1month of development time. And if these characters storyline doesn't end in threesome action, just there for blueballs, then I guess not to add them would be better option.
Usually additional characters irrelevant to the storyline and just there to flirt which can be achieved by Jake/Marvin...it means more trolling.

 

[Adhdclassic]

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