VN Ren'Py Our Netorase Story [v0.1] [VeroSin]

[Verosin325]

Overview:
"Our Netorase Story" is an erotic visual novel about a couple, "Nathan and Jenny", who are in an open relationship and finally starting their new life together in the fictional city of "Los Vivi", the home of the entertainment industry. Follow along with their story of past and present to determine their future. How they make it in the Entertainment Industry as a filmmaker and a star while having a lot of fun along the way.​

Thread Updated: 2025-03-16
Release Date: 2025-03-15
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Version: 0.1
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac, Android
Language: English
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[Wahcha]

always glad to see another Netorase game, its pretty rare to see it done well. Hopefully the writing in this game can make it work

but just having more of this genre is great

 

[ShadwVeil]

wow, i see a pussy, i click on it

 

[Verosin325]

always glad to see another Netorase game, its pretty rare to see it done well. Hopefully the writing in this game can make it work

but just have more of this genre is great

I'll try my best to do this justice.

 

[aldnoah000]

 

[HELIO CESAR]

not mine
the ia renders are overal good but the shading is pretty inconsistent, girl is even black at 2nd picture . could be a tan tho.

 

[EnterYourNameHere]

Couldnt find any netorare content in this game.

 

[Verosin325]

not mine
the ia renders are overal good but the shading is pretty inconsistent, girl is even black at 2nd picture . could be a tan tho.

Thank you for your words. I'll be fixing the inconsistencies as the game progresses. Let's call it tan for now.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[davorix]

Thank you for your words. I'll be fixing the inconsistencies as the game progresses. Let's call it tan for now.

Makes totally sense. Why even thinking about creating an initial release that is worth it. It's easier to spit something out with 10 minutes of play times, many flaws and bad writing and put the "Support me on XXX" on it.

 

[lolwhatxd]

At least edit the eyes pls they look so weird.
But the story seems interesing so I'll support this game for now.

 

[Cityoftree]

Interesting

 

[KyoriKusagami]

Feedback for the first version and playthrough:

1- You need to be careful with the narrative pacing because everything happens too quickly like they have been doing this for months or years. There's no context or build-up for the reader to assimilate the situation.
2- The player has some options to choose from in case the girlfriend or boyfriend had sex before their meeting at the airport. So, I can deduce there are at least 3 routes and 2 subroutes in your game, Will you keep those routes, or will the options be just dialogue changes?
3- The renders have some inconsistencies (the eyes' format and position, hairstyles changes mid-scene).

 

[Verosin325]

Feedback for the first version and playthrough:

1- You need to be careful with the narrative pacing because everything happens too quickly like they have been doing this for months or years. There's no context or build-up for the reader to assimilate the situation.
2- The player has some options to choose from in case the girlfriend or boyfriend had sex before their meeting at the airport. So, I can deduce there are at least 3 routes and 2 subroutes in your game, Will you keep those routes, or will the options be just dialogue changes?
3- The renders have some inconsistencies (the eyes' format and position, hairstyles changes mid-scene).

Thank you for your feedback.
1 - You are correct and you will find out about all that as the story progresses.
2 - I would say, it will be a mixture of both. At this point in the story, it will mostly be dialogue changes.
3 - Will fix them.

 

[anoncoomer9001]

but you know what neotarase means, the game should have indicated first that the couple was on that path, no, instead first it presents me with an absolute slut and then the choice, it is incorrect as a writing procedure, but you only need to see fucking and you don't care about anything else, you will tolerate filth, it's called being honest with those who approach the game, he could have written that it was pure NTR, it was fine, I avoided it, but write neotarese story then there are scenes of cuckold and slut, it's no friend, you're not taking the piss out of me. you like to play it, but if I say my piece, it's convenient to have my post deleted, then it turns out that the positive stars are written by friends of the DEv to make positive publicity, hahahaha and I'm spam. good luck to the cheating game.

Can someone explain to me why people on this website are such absolute spergs over the labeling of NTR/NTS games? Like some threads have probably about 80% of the posts dedicated to people arguing over it. Seriously how are people getting so emotional over something so trivial.

Also you acting outraged like you were just forced to pay $200 to play this demo except the game is was posted by the dev for free and there is no Patreon or even a donation link.

 

[Dealbreaker]

You are correct and you will find out about all that as the story progresses.

Problem is if you work with flashbacks in a porn game - you have shown all the action, threesoms dps anal in the first minute, then there is nothing to anticipate anymore.

 

[rrr@rrr]

but you know what neotarase means, the game should have indicated first that the couple was on that path, no, instead first it presents me with an absolute slut and then the choice, it is incorrect as a writing procedure, but you only need to see fucking and you don't care about anything else, you will tolerate filth, it's called being honest with those who approach the game, he could have written that it was pure NTR, it was fine, I avoided it, but write neotarese story then there are scenes of cuckold and slut, it's no friend, you're not taking the piss out of me. you like to play it, but if I say my piece, it's convenient to have my post deleted, then it turns out that the positive stars are written by friends of the DEv to make positive publicity, hahahaha and I'm spam. good luck to the cheating game.

Just read the description of the game keyword open relationship

 

[Dealbreaker]

open relationship

which is neither NTS nor NTR. This already is a problem.

 

[sugarontoast]

Can someone explain to me why people on this website are such absolute spergs over the labeling of NTR/NTS games? Like some threads have probably about 80% of the posts dedicated to people arguing over it. Seriously how are people getting so emotional over something so trivial.

Also you acting outraged like you were just forced to pay $200 to play this demo except the game is was posted by the dev for free and there is no Patreon or even a donation link.

The site refuses to add more tags to properly label them. There's only the NTR tag, not one for NTS or Netori

 

[Derenx]

Alrighty, time for some useful feedback (written in bad english, lol)

First of all, when releasing a game, always think about games like Phasmophobia, The Forest, Satisfactory.
Why? Because they went into early access with a great product and developed it over months/years until the 1.0 Release.
What do i want to say? When going in with 0.1, your game should have a good amount of content (we don't talk about 10hours, but it should keep people entertained for at least 45-60min.)
Also the writing, the art (i will comment on this later) and the whole game should be in a state, where the user finds not much buggs, inconsistencies or annoying loops. And it simply must be catchy.

You choose NTS to be the main topic and that's a hard one, because there are enough others out there, who make games with the same topic. So the game must be good.

About the writing, try to build the setting up more smoothly and not to fast. Yes, much writing takes a lot of time, but you save time by using AI for the Art. So use that time. Also find smth that makes the game special.

About Ai Art, idc if a game has AI Art or not. If I like the Visuals and the game itself, anything is fine. But using AI, the Art should be on a constant level (if your characters are evolving in one scene, then you have to change smth). Idk what you are using for creating, but you should maybe reconsider, if it gives you that much different outcomes.
I for myself use AI Art often, but mostly for logos and other work related stuff, but I always generate stuff until it is at least 9/10. (Look at my pfp, it still has a lot of flaws, even I really tried to make it best)
And yes, that might take time, but it is important, else users will have problems with your art.

And finally, since i saw you wanted to start a patreon, if you want others to support you, always listen to your fans and users and never try to play around with them.
They are, at the end, the foundation of the game.

So maybe try to rework your current game for the 0.2, get the Art together, make the story longer and more catchy, give the writing more focus.
And try to have a name and tags, that really match your game.