I felt like the shower scene was a big miss. The hottest scene in the game was that pool scene in the last update. This shower scene is the follow-up for that scene....and it was more or less a repeat of the previous shower scene without the tension.
They could've sucked on each others boobs, which to me is a natural progression from what previously happened, and would've been 10X hotter than just kissing and groping again. That could've advanced easily to a masturbation scene too.
The shower scene would have worked well if Sophia had kept masturbating with Ellie. Stopping so early felt far too conservative from a narrative perspective. But if she and Ellie had actually started sucking on each other, that would have felt out of character to me- because that would be a really big step forward. I could have bought a scenario where, while they both masturbate they lean on one another or feel each other up. Maybe even that Ellie would learn in and kiss Sophia while they both climaxed. But for them to both start sucking on each others boobs is too big a jump for me. That said, at least it would have been progress!
You guys did say my words !
First of all, the breasts groping scene was kinda short, boringly repeatable to what Sophia/Julia did at the pool and i can't believe that our little devil Ellie was not trying to put her lip interactively on her mother's nipples. By the way, jumping to the masturbation subject was a smart way of L&P, i think it helped the Sophia/Ellie to move fast to their comfortable zone further. So i could forget the breasts groping for a while.
Good start but bad end and lack of the tension in this section, as you guys analysed. I'd like to share mine:
1. Inconsistent Sophia's behaviour:
- After turning on by just looking her daughter's naked body, trying to move her ass back to feel her daughter's hairy little bush and then having her daughter's "permission" to masturbate, but Sophia could quit her tension easily ??
- She should have continued this lesson with Ellie till the final, both of them must have cummed together; if they could have change their hands to masturbate to each other, wow it would be fantastic, the big spotlight of the whole update !
2. Where's is the old bold Ellie:
- Ellie started her mother's big breasts topic since the previous day (after pool scene, she whispered to Sophia) and then she actually asking to soap them in the shower, but following up this was just some quick nipples's brushing. She was cutting it out to jump to the masturbation topic, OK, a pausing and a smart jumping.
- The masturbation session was flowing well by the way (even Sophia stopped incomprehensibly) until Ellie climaxed "FUUUCK!!!". What if she did not collapse into her mother's arms but leaning forward and trying to suck Sophia's nipples, to finish what she started ? Everything could have driven crazy more...
3. L&P treatment:
- The kissing between mother and daughter are still the spotlight of all time, but in this update it was kinda weak and faded. I can understand the progressing, the meltable Ellie after climaxing,... But can you put more details on this sweet moment? Such as more different angles, more describing words, more tongues,... there was not even a single animation of this goddamit !
- I think i will make a chance to
Update 0.150 when Sophia/Ellie/Partricia join together in Sam's concert in the evening. Damn it, It maybe around next December.
I just changed my tier on Patreon, more than 50% decreasing. To make it as a stick for this lasted update's quality, and also a force to help him drive faster
